You had it all.

Your mother's love.

Your "perfect" and safe world.

But it was all fake.

It all went down the day a stranger knocked on your door and opened your eyes.

Now, you'll try to discover yourself with the people who rescued you.


Build a new life, or die trying to.

Discover your powers and weaknesses.

Choose Mc's animal companion.

Uncover your past.

Befriend your new companions or at least some of them.

Romance 1 of the 6 Ro's.

Leon (M)

Leon is a kind heart, receiving you with open arms from the very first second. He has a calm temper and a strong brain. His amicable and strategic qualities make him the leader of the mercenary group. But it's visible that something dark lurks in his gentle eyes.

He's very tall (1,93 cm (6′ 4″)) and athletic, with tan skin and a scar on his lip. His black hair is cut short, and his violet eyes reflect perfectly his calm and serene character.

He wears a light brown shirt, black pants, and dark brown boots.

He fights with a simple silver shield.

Iara (F) 

Iara is the second in charge. Her strategic and cold demeanor is enough to compensate for Leon's calm procedure, giving the group an excellent balance. She's quiet and observant but has a soft spot and cares for her companions.

She's tall (1,80 cm (5′ 11″)) and has a lean but athletic build. She keeps her curly red hair in a high ponytail. Her golden accessories shine in contrast with her pale skin. She has several scars, but one is more perceptible, crossing her eye, a wound that caused one of her turquoise eyes to be completely pale white.

She wears lightweight golden armor with soft beige fur on her shoulders.

Her golden and bluish-green accessories adorn her neck, ears, and wrist.

She fights with a black and gold whip.

Matheus (M)

Matheus is a charismatic individual. He's clever and very fond of puns and jokes. The young man has quite the ability to read people and has been trying to help you understand your past. As friendly as he is, he seems to have trouble letting people get closer to him.

He's average (1,78 m (5′ 10″)) and lean, with umber skin. His soft brown curls are cut short, and his olive eyes are full of compassion and comprehension.

He wears glasses and a simple sleeveless white shirt combined with baggy pants.

He fights with a silver crossbow with a crow symbol engraved on it.

Dante (M)

Dante is in charge of the magic rituals and enchants. He's a grumpy and hotheaded kind of person. Being a fire Elementalist, he can summon fire, but he's not immune to it, having an arm covered in a burn scar. 

He tends to be reserved and doesn't like being touched by strangers.

He's average (1,75 m (5′ 9″)) and chubby, with fair skin. His chin-length hair is golden blonde, and his eyes are as red as the flames he summons.

He wears a sleeveless shirt with a turtleneck and black pants. He wears in his right ear two black earrings.

He fights with a saw-toothed silver sword.

Siena (F)

Siena is a cunning woman, always having the right words to escape the most challenging situations. She's very fond of Matheus, and just like her friend, she loves making jokes and a good fight.

She's short (1,57 m (5′ 2″)) and robust, with olive skin. She has raven long hair that matches her dark eyes. 

She wears a long black shirt and greenish baggy pants.

She fights with greenish and silver gauntlets.

Levi (NB)

Levi is cold and seems to hate you for what you are. They are sarcastic and straightforward. They tend to avoid you, but even with their cold distance they seem interested at you. Maybe something in you draws them.

They're average (1,70m (5′ 7″)) and athletic, with light brown skin. Their shoulder-length black hair is partially tied in a short ponytail. Their gray eyes seem cold when they look at you. Will they grow warmer with time?

They wear a sleeveless gray shirt and leather pants. And a brown leather arm bracelet.

They fight with silver daggers.

                    ⚠️Trigger Warning: This game is rated 17+⚠️

Currently it has : Self-harm (not intentional), emotional dependence, emotion manipulation and violence.


                                       The game's images were made with Canvas.

StatusIn development
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 4.8 out of 5 stars
(24 total ratings)
AuthorMaluarty
GenreInteractive Fiction
TagsTwine

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I think you accidentaly wrote CM instead of M when putting the characters heights. 1,93 CM is quite short :)

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Please add an extra line break in between paragraphs. As it is I often can't tell where one paragraph ends and the next begins here, which leads to a rather awkward reading experience.

Also when selecting hair length, 'length' is misspelled on multiple of the options (specifically chin and shoulder length). 

Also also see if you can find a native english speaker to proofread or something. There's just a lot of small mistakes that add up. The story is good, I dont mean to discourage you or anything, but it needs a lot of clean up to be as good as it clearly could be.

Got something good here I hope it gets the attention it deserves.

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Hi!

I'm working on adding some breaks on the paragraphs, because you're right it makes a little weird and tiring to read, and I completely forgot to put it.

Thanks for the correction, I'll try to clean up the writing of the prologue and I found someone to mark the mistakes before I publish the chapters.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

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Good so far. I take it English isn't your first language? 

 Thanks! No,  my first language is portuguese. :)

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God, you changed a lot of the beginning dude!

  Loved what you added and loved the Ro's!! (officially a Siena simp)👉👈

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Loved the update, I just finished reading it and looking foward for moreee!! 

and I'll be hoping to smooch Leon or Levi as soon as we got the chance <3(The others are cute too, I'll smooch them all! but i'll give priority to the cute young daddy and the grumpy b*tch, hahaha)

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Thanks! kskskks

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i love this story ohmygodddd when is the next update cominggg

I'm glad you like it! :D

About the next update, i'm not very sure about a specific date. But I want to post it before june (let's see if my cram course will let me ksks).

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i just wanted a matheus in my life 🤧

We all need a Matheus in our lifes ksksk

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I WILL make levi love me

 😑


Also Woah I wasn't expecting that reveal. And I adored every interaction with the ROs. This was such a good IF ♥️

Thaaakssss!!! ♥️♥️♥️

Soon, let Levi get their time, they are still in shock ksksks

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Loved the update, can't wait for more!

Thanks!! ♥️♥️♥️

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Just Passing to say that I really liked It! The story is good( and I have to agree it is soo Tangled vibes! )Roxaneiskindaofhotmustsay,bye!🤓

Dude sjdksdjsandj Thanks!<3<3

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WAIT WHY IS THIS LOWK GIVING RAPUNZEL loving this already

 It truly has Rapunzel vibes! kksksks

And  I'm glad you're liking it! ;D

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Just finished playing, and I am so hooked! I can't wait to uncover the MC's past. If our MC has some sort of royal blood or a similar background that would justify such a title, maybe she was stolen from her family? The fact that Roxane called Isma a demon suggests that our MC might also be one, albeit a Royal Demon? I don't know, I just want to romance Leon and Levi, muahahaha! this kinda reminds of rapunzel..

I'm glad you liked it! ♡

I can't really say anything about it because... of spoilers👀👀👀👀 but Leon and Levi are comming soon don't worry :p

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Good game! loved the story so far, keeping going!😊

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Thank you ! I'm glad you liked it <3333

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Just finished it and I gotta say I'm veryy curious about how it'll go (The comment claiming mother as mother Gothel stuck w/ me now I can't imagine her as anything but her😞😞). Another thing is, on Tumblr,  have you done asks on?? 

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"Mother Gothel" is totally the best adjective for her kkkk She's kinda of a bad person...

And for the Tumblr question, I haven't done but feel free to ask something if you want :) ❤

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She was my first crush😭😭

And ofc! I (mostly only send rizz lines on anon asks) will get back 2 ya if I think of anything to ask!

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Dude...You're crushes must be wild kskksks! (loved it ♡)

And sure! :)

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I like it so far, I look forward to what's next. 💕 I can't wait to find out what the freak took place and what MCs future holds.

If I do have any feedback: My only thing would be ( something that I don't mind trying to get used to, as you update. )- But the text being typed in a bullet point kind of style. It was making it hard to get really into it- immersion wise. It sometimes felt like I was just stating actions and events; versus reading a plot. Almost how poems are written in lines. 

Mind you, this isn't really a huge issue. It doesn't make your game unbearable to read at all. I think it's more of a personal qualm than anything, my mind is just used to seeing paragraph format.

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Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!

Yes, this part of the prologue is very to the point. I didn't really stop to think about it, but I went to see the second part that I wrote, and it is more in paragraph format than the released part. I think it's because I had more things to write about, like character descriptions, enviorement and etc.  But I'll take a better look at it and try to improve it for the next update!

Thank you very much for your opinion! ♥️

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It's giving rapunzel.. i totaaally didn't sing mother knows best from tangled while playing this... 👀


I loved it tho. It's a great start. A few typos here and there but honestly who gives a shit as long as the story is great lol and it is. I'm excited to meet everyone else. And Levi can suck it.. ima make them love me 😒♥️

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I'm really glad you liked it!! Roxanne is totally a Gothel kk  I'm glad that the typos did not interfere with the reading , I'll take a look  at it again but if you see any typos you can totally tell me, It helps a lot. :)

And last but not less important...Levi might be bad...















 but not as bad as the fall they will have for you. ♥

(...I'll just leave now. I need to sleep <3)

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Aaaand you just made me want to romance them more.. good job!! I will see if I can take screenshots for you. And also dude go get your rest! You deserve it take care of yourself ♥️


As far as typos go. I think "illuminating" is the only one I saw. You fixed the other's but I also noticed where Isma calls MC "My Lord" or could be "My leige" i only read it once after all is missing. I will attach some screenshots for you tho. And this was kinda fun reading through again. Like playing where is Waldo 🤣

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Yes, I realized that error only when i went to bed  kkkk I changed the variable's name, because of the mc's pronouns, so Isma's part  wasn't working . I fix it now! Thanks

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Hi there, i just started and im loving it so far. There's a typo in the scene where our mother absolutely bitchslaps the shit out of me. In case you wanted to fix it

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Thanks for the feedback! I'll fix it, and I'm glad you  enjoyed it so far :)

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No problem, happy to help  luv😁

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It has a very thrilling beginning ✨. I'm eager for more ^^.

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I'm glad you liked it!! ♡♡♡

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Wow what a great start. I can already tell I'm going to love it

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Ow! Thank you  ♡